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“Supernatural Assault Unit: Bounty”
By: Nelson Carrasquillo AKA Big Puerto Rico
An Ultimate COH adventure
**In a universe where Paragon City’s biggest protectorate group,
the Hero Corps, is corrupt and filled with ignorant heroes following
the commands of the corrupt leaders, few heroes know the truth. Most of
them are forced into a life of hiding or forced to put on a show and
agree with the corrupt to keep their lives. Few actually fight back,
and few keep their will to fight on. Some of those few have come
together and formed the Supernatural Assault Unit. **
Everyone at the
SAU headquarters was updated with the plan of HC to turn lower level
heroes into super powered mindless zombies with the help of Dr.
Vahzilok. Limerick, Lady Sinsation, and the corrupt hero Night Trojan
resurrect the fallen villain, Boriqua Soldier; who is Big PR’s
older brother. Both sides are now calling on friends and getting ready
for a battle.
The villains were walking down to a portal device in
St. Martial, which was located by the pyramid-shaped casino, when all
of a sudden Limerick started to scream.
“NO! Please, don’t. Don’t touch me
you damn villain! NO! Arrgh!” Limerick said. He grabbed his head
in pain. He had fallen to his knees trying to snap out of the flashback
of when he was tortured by the Tsoo, before he became a villain.
“What the hell is wrong with him?” Night Trojan asked.
“He’s goin on one of his crazy rants;
it’s a flash back of when he was tortured,” Lady Sinsation
She walked over to him and threw a back hand slap.
“Thanks, Sin,” Limerick said and rubbed the side of his
face. “Ah, anyway the great thing now, Boriqua Soldier, is that
Arachnos put up a base portal, you just put in which one u want to go
to and it’ll be there; unless it’s been out of service for
a while, they stole the blue prints for these from the heroes, ha, ha,
they are useful for something after all.”
Night Trojan looked at the villain with an angry
glare, but Limerick didn’t pay any attention to him. Limerick put
in the information that they needed and the portal; a circular
platform, glowed. Limerick, Boriqua Soldier, Night Trojan, and Lady
Sinsation walked into the portal. In a blink of an eye the group was in
the base of the villain group called Hollow Society.
“Not much has changed since last I was here,” Boriqua Soldier mentioned.
“No need to change it, it works just fine as it is!” a strong voice came from around the corner.
“I can still recognize that voice, it’s
been some time, Gibu,” Boriqua Soldier greeted the rather large
brute and shook his hand.
“Good to see you old friend,” Gibu
looked toward the hero Night Trojan, “Who the hell is this
Night Trojan stepped forward, “Perhaps you
have heard of me, I’m Night Trojan, I put the hit out on Big
“Never heard of you, noob, now get out of my face before I put my fist in it.”
Limerick walked up behind Night Trojan and whispered
into his ear, “You think he is big now, wait till he gets into
his stone armor, his fist gets bigger and harder.”
Night Trojan backed up from the villain. “I get the hint,” he said.
“Good, now, I heard that Limerick had found
out where the Tome of Tormvodel and I knew some shit was gonna go down;
so I took the liberty of callin in some of the people from the
group,” Gibu motioned for Limerick and the rest to enter the big
room down the hall.
“Good you just saved us some trouble,” Boriqua Soldier said.
SAU SG base
“So who do we have?” Big PR asked.
“Well, I got my friend, Sir. Joshua and he
said that he knows a couple of people who would be interested,”
“I couldn’t get anyone new, sorry guys,” Kid Aux said.
“It’s ok, don’t worry about it,” Big PR added. “Anyone else get anyone?”
“Yeah, I got Vent Sol, it’s been a while
and I don’t have an idea where anyone else is, it’s more
than likely that they are dead,” Mirafox’s eyes showed her
concern for that fact, she straightened up at a hasty pace.
“Well we need to train, get the rust out of
the team work that we have acquired through the years. I can tell you
one thing this is not going to be easy,” Rey pointed out.
“What’s gonna happen with those super zombie heroes?” Pobre asked.
“Well we have to hope that they put that on
the back burner, if not then we will be facing more than just my
brother and his band of flunkies,” Big PR said.
“I took the liberty of putting a training
facility in here, I didn’t know for sure if anyone else but me
would use it but I made it to accommodate more than one person,”
Mirafox motioned to the location of the training room.
“Go ahead and train guys I’m gonna
monitor the computer for any activity,” Big PR sat at the
computer and gazed up at the huge screen.
“Okay, Cris. Let’s go on, I got some rust!” Mirafox smiled and walked ahead of the group.
Big PR sat at the computer just waiting for any sign
of what his brother was doing. An hour had passed bye and Big PR was
lost in the past, he was snapped out of it when his brother’s
face appeared on the screen.
“Hello, brother…I see that your computer is still up and running,” Boriqua Soldier said.
“It always surprised me how you got a direct feed goin with this computer,” Big PR stood up.
“Well, it’s not like it used to be, I
can’t see anything I just hear your voice, but this isn’t a
friendly visit, Cris. You will die, and by my own hands. As for your
little sidekicks I have brought together the old team.”
“You and me both, Luis, I’m ready for
your assault! I don’t know why the hell you took the bounty, but
I don’t care. If it’s a battle you want…then a war
“Ha Luis…I haven’t been called
that since we first went our separate ways. You know why I took it and
I will kill you by my own hands, no matter how hard you try to prevent
it. I’m determined to kill you, and remember when we are
determined we finish the task, that’s how our family works. Good
bye, brother, for this is the last day that you will have peace and
tranquility, for the rest of your days of your life…all hell
will be brought on you and your crew; until you die!”
The link was severed and the image of Big PR’s
brother faded into the blackness of the screen. Big PR knew that
something was different about his brother, and knew that Lady Sinsation
and Limerick had corrupted his mind even more.
“Seems like a true war is coming, Cris,” Mirafox said as she walked up behind the hero.
“It doesn’t matter, Mirafox…Big
PR is a good leader and we will bring everything to the table, evil
will fall at the hands of the Supernatural Assault Unit, once
again,” Innamorata added.
Big PR turned to his teammates, “It’s
gonna go down soon, I hope we are ready…I
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