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“Supernatural Assault Unit: Bounty”
By: Nelson Carrasquillo AKA Big Puerto Rico
An Ultimate COH adventure
**In a universe where Paragon City’s biggest protectorate group,
the Hero Corps, is corrupt and filled with ignorant heroes following
the commands of the corrupt leaders, few heroes know the truth. Most of
them are forced into a life of hiding or forced to put on a show and
agree with the corrupt to keep their lives. Few actually fight back,
and few keep their will to fight on. Some of those few have come
together and formed the Supernatural Assault Unit. **
style battle had begun between the infamous Hollow Society and the
reborn Supernatural Assault Unit. With the fact that Vent Sol would not
be released to SAU until the winner was determined Big PR made the
choice to send out Kid Aux. As if to play sadistic mind games Boriqua
Soldier sent in the larger Stone brute known as Gibu. In a fast paced
battle each man was brought to their edge. Thanks in part to the
training that Big PR gave him, Kid Aux stood victorious…but not
“Get his fat ass over here!” Boriqua Soldier demanded of his fellow villains, in disappointment.
matter…didn’t think a teenager could…beat one of
you? You forget…I have the man helpin me out,” Kid Aux
spoke of Big PR and tried to withstand the pain of talking itself.
“He has faced you countless times and beat you, ha, ha.”
Big PR stepped down from the small ledge that
elevated him and the rest of SAU from the “fight zone” and
helped Kid Aux
“Take care of him Innamorata,” Big PR handed the wounded hero to the pink clad defender.
“Just give me a few, he’ll be as good as
new,” Innamorata laid Kid Aux down and started to heal him.
“So, who’s next?” the feminine voice of the brute named Mistress Venty Sol called out.
“Who is she?” Pobre Diabla asked.
“She is the extracted evil of the heroine
named Venty Sol. The original died fighting with us, she and Vent Sol
are related,” Rey Tormentor answered.
Boriqua Soldier leaned over and whispered into Mistress' ear. She focused on the other side and smirked.
Pobre, who was still trying to figure out Mistress
Venty Sol, saw that Boriqua Soldier looked as though he was
strategizing. She had a feeling and so she pulled out her bow and an
arrow from her hulster slowly. While she took out her arrow Pobre also
tried to trace the eyes of the villain. she inserted the arrow into the
"I'm comin' to get you," Mistress said, then she began to teleport over.
As if it was in slow motion Pobre Diabla saw the
villain start her teleport, Pobre turned to Innamorata and drew her bow
and fired it. "Look out, say it damnit," Pobre Diabla said to her self,
she didn't have to because of the emotion behind it, Innamorata heard
The instant that Innamorata turned away from Kid Aux
all the elements of that moment came together, the arrow was a special
exploding one, when Mistress Venty Sol came through near Innamorata the
arrow hit her torso and exploded, which sent her flying into a wall
near by, the debree from the blast could have harmed Innamorata and Kid
Aux, but Innamorata put up a pychic shield to protect her and the young
"Good shot, Karla, that was good looking out,"
Innamorata said and went back to healing Kid Aux. "Damn, Kid, your
tough, must come from your mom."
"Must have been the training, seems like this comes
naturally," Pobre Diabla said. "Now I'm gonna take care of this one,"
she headed to were Mistress landed. "Wait a minute, where is she?"
"Over here, dumb bitch!" Mistress Venty said and
smashed Pobre Diabla in the face with a fist of rock. "You think that
you're smooth with that lucky ass shot? Ha!" Mistress then formed a
rock mallet and hit Pobre as hard as she can.
The blow threw Pobre Diabla back toward where
Innamorata and Kid Aux were at. Big PR ran in front of them and caught
Diabla. "Are you ok, Karla?" Big PR asked.
"You know, brother, that's not fair, you're
inturrupting!" Boriqua Soldier said with a hint of sarcasim. "Seems
like he want's to play by his own rules."
"We never picked out who was goin next, your girl
there attacked us! That is no way in any form a tournament style
attack, so I wouldn't be talkin," Big PR retailiated.
"Screw this, bring them in, Limerick," Boriqua Soldier said to the crazed Irish villain.
"Great Choice, boss," Limerick replied and walked off.
"Where the hell is your lackey goin?" Sir. Joshua asked.
"Ha, ha, you'll see," Small-Soldier answered.
An eerie silence had filled the area and each side
waited in atticpation. Vent Sol, who was proped up on a broken light
post had regained his consiousness and strength. He looked around and
tried to figure out what he was in. As he looked upon his friends he
noticed something coming from behind his enemies. "Look out," he
struggled. It was as if he had said nothing at all, his warning fell on
deaf ears thanks to the fact that the thing he was trying to warn his
friends about had already taken a first step.
"Man I feel better, thanks...Innamorata," Kid Aux's
eyes trained onto something in the air and worry filled his eyes. "You
know I think I take that back,"
"Heh, what are you talking about?" Innamorata asked.
Kid Aux pointed to the air and Innamorata looked.
The way Kid Aux was acting caught the attention of Big PR and the rest
of the heroes.
"We're in trouble," Martian Banshee muttered.
"No Shit," War-Lord said.
"You know, we should move so that the big barrage of
giant flame balls doesn't hit us," Mirafox said and grabbed the nearest
people around her and got ready to teleport.
"You're right, move!" Big PR yelled. He grabbed
Innamorata and Kid Aux, but before they were able to do anything the
flames were too close and the the blast of the combined attack had
blown them away.
The ground was seered and smoke smoldered all around
the fallen heroes. The effects of the flames blackened the ground and
the armor of Rey Tormentor and Martian Banshee, along with some of the
costumes of the heroes. Everyone had recovered from the blind attack
and looked at each other to see if everyone was ok.
"What the hell was that?" Kid Aux asked.
"We can't forget that...army of zombie heroes. They
must have planned this from the beginning," Martian Banshee said.
"Yeah figures that my brother had an ace up
his sleeve," Big PR commented. "Hey, Luis, what ever happened to the
tournament that you wanted so bad?"
"Eh, I figured that was a waste of time, I have no patience anyway," Boriqua Soldier responded.
The army of hero zombies had surfaced and stood
behind the Hollow Society, life-less and and unintelligent. "You see
these heroes are long dead, the only thing they know now is...well to
dance, no that's not it, ah right...to kill. Ha, ha, ha, he, he. To
think, heroes will be helping us villains take down heroes, all be it
that these heroes are really dead and their souls are probably floating
some where in a culdren or something in a cave belonging to what's ever
left of the Circle Of Thorns," Limerick commented.
"Hmm," Rey Tormentor said.
"We may be up shit's creek without a paddle and all
you have to say is 'Hmm,' well I see it's all goin' to be all right,"
Kid Aux stood up and wiped himself off.
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