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Kings Row: Essence of the Fallen

Falling, ever falling towards the water; it rushes towards him, the cold air whistling past his face, his hair whipped into a storm as the rush and shock of the oxygen crushes his lungs in an iron grip… blessed unconsciousness creeping towards him – blackness shrouding his vision, closer, closer and now darkness. The world is silent, the sound of the water, the air the only noises that he hears. This is his end, his failure, his disaster succoured by this sacrifice. This Knightly thing to do…

James winced as the bright light burned through his closed eye lids. The sun light tearing through, waking him from his doziness. He sat up, crossing his arms about him as he woke up from his slumber on his families land. Off to the East lay the New Forest, a place he liked to walk and explore to relax himself after his busy job in the city.

James Steele, city stock broker and London socialite, loved coming back to his family’s old mansion, the horse paddocks and broad expanse of land a relaxing change from the hectic lifestyle imposed on him by his firm and the city he nominally called home.

His family’s money came from owning the local steel mines in Sheffield, England, and this money gave him the opportunities that he had taken full advantage of – a fencing champion and Olympic representative and a Cambridge graduate in modern economics, James had all his life in front of him, his chances to succeed endless.

He stood up and started walking towards the forest, wanting a last final chance to walk through the forest before he had to head back to the capital city, his long weekend away most definitely coming to a close.

As he entered the eaves of the forest, the shadow of the trees blotted out the sun – the occasional shaft of sunlight pierced the forest rooftop to illuminate a bright path in front of him. He followed willingly; after all, he had walked these trails for nigh on 21 years.

As he walked further into the trees a cold chill wrapped its cloak around him, goose bumps prickled his skin, but that wasn’t just the cold – a sense of anticipation, and in some ways, a certain amount of anxiety consumed him. It drove the air out of his lungs and made him breathe deep, taking in the musty smells of the forest; the rotting leaves, the dead undergrowth, the dew and the sap all mingling to create a texture in the air that was palpable – a tension overcame him as he felt drawn further inwards. He was compelled to walk further and further – his body overriding his unwilling mind.

The towering trees spiralled high into the sky, stretching up past the range of his eyes, the shadows hiding the tree rooftops, giving it a wan light. The golden autumnal colours flashed bright as he continued his exploration, his right hand moving up to push the occasional branch from his face.

This was the furthest he walked in the forest and he could tell it was an area that was scarcely visited. Very little had disturbed the trail in front of him, no sign of outside interference showed that anyone had even come near this place.

A hidden tree root caught his foot and he stumbled, sprawling onto his hands and knees the air knocked out of his lungs. James picked himself up slowly and then stopped in puzzlement – underneath a massive oak the shadowed door of a cave entrance was excavated into the earth, digging right underneath the roots of the tree.

Intrigued, he walked closer and saw that hewn into the surface of the entrance were rock stairs leading down to a heavy stone door that was left ajar. Dead vegetation lay cluttered in the doorway; a fallen branch covered half the door.

He stepped softly down the stairs, treading carefully as the stone crumbled and cracked – it was clearly weather worn and looked as if it had been around for a long, long time. He dragged the branch down, throwing it clear of the doorway and noticed a faded and weatherworn inscription chiselled heavily into the door:

“HERE LIES SIR MARTIN STEELE, SON OF ARTHUR, DAUGHTER OF ELISABETH AND LOYAL SERVANT OF HIS ROYAL HIGHNESS, KING RICHARD THE LIONHEART”

Underneath the heavy etching lay the Steele family coat of arms – a quartered shield showing a mighty tower, an anvil and hammer, a rearing horse and a pair of broadswords locked in combat around the hilt.

This escutcheon meant a lot to James – it was the relic of his lost father and mother, and the only tie to his family he had left. This estate was an empty land, no one living in the mansion and no one occupying the land. It was the way James wanted it – left exactly as he remember it, no stone turned, no room changed. It was his living reminder of what he had lost most bitterly in the cowardly attack by the Neo Nazi’s proclaiming themselves as the “Fifth Column”.

His head fell as his hand laid itself on the coat of arms – the stone rough underneath his fingertips. He traced the lettering, mouthing the words softly. He never knew this tomb existed, and most amazingly of all, it was still undiscovered; the dust lay undisturbed inside the doorway.

He leaned heavily on the door; it creaked alarmingly as the stone hinges groaned under the unexpected movement. James pushed harder, using both hands and bracing his feet, driving the door open as his sinews tightened under the strain.

The door collapsed heavily, the loud crash as the stone split up the middle sundering the forest’s quiet as birds called loudly as their rest was disturbed. James dusted his hand as he stepped over the threshold, placing his feet softly as the awe inspiring tomb lay in front of him.

The echoes ceased and the atmosphere grew quiet again, the sense of unease grew on him again; the goose bumps returned as his breath shortened, adrenalin pumping, muscles tensing and mind spinning as he took in the cobwebs in the corners of the tomb, the dust on the floor and the painted relief on the far side of the room.

The tomb was roughly 30 metres square with a huge stone coffin in the middle of the floor, a bench at either end of the final resting place. The ancient tomb seemed to dull all sounds as James took a few tentative steps in side the doorway. Drops of water slowly trickled down from a crack in the ceiling and echoed through the musty atmosphere. It was the only noise to be heard – the forest outside had hushed down to its normal silence…

“It was about time you showed up!” a loud voice echoed in the darkness. James jumped in fright as the voice broke the silence and an apparition appeared in front of him, a man dressed in baggy trousers down to his knees, rags wrapped around his shins and stout boots covering his feet. On his chest and shoulders lay massive scarring; burns, lash marks and various other torture implements were exhibited on the chest of what James could only describe as a ghost, an apparition from the depths of Hell.

“Yes indeed, you’ve arrived later than expected, but at least you’ve filled out nicely – you’re not as thin as the last Steele, that’s for sure.” The ghosts ‘eyes’ looked at James as if he were sizing up a piece of meat, gazing much further than the surface – he felt like he was being examined underneath a microscope.

“What you don’t realise James, is that you’ve already been here before. And you know it, but you don’t remember it. It’s quite a conundrum, no? I am known as Rite of Penance, I am the guardian of the sword, the keeper of the secret and the steel behind the Steele’s.” He smiled wanly at his joke, and then shook his head as he took in James’ incomprehension.

“You’re here because it is the time of your Penance James, it is time you atoned for your past; and your future. It is here that we shall test you, it is here that we shall measure you, and it is here that we shall decide if you are of the true blood line…”

“The… the true what?” James exclaimed.

“The true blood line,” Rite said, “the true blood of the hero.”

James’ disbelief overrode his shock at the apparition. He scoffed at the idea. “The true blood of the hero? What hero? The world doesn’t have heroes, it’s full of thugs and violence – no one is here to save anyone any more. Its survival of the fittest and my parents are prime examples of that!” He clenched his fists as the wounding memories reverberated inside him again. A burning sensation welled up in his chest as the vision of his parents gunned down in front of him, bullets riddling their bodies as they stood in front of him, his father snarling defiance as the shells ripped into his body. He saw his father regain his feet, rush one of his attackers and grapple him; baring the Nazi to the ground. His mother kneeling in front of him, shielding him from the violent attack.

James shook his head and cleared his throat, the memories had risen unbidden – he certainly didn’t want them to come up…

“Did you put that into my head? Why did you bring those visions out?” His eyes became cold and narrow as he looked at Rite with venom.

“Because you needed them. No heroes? Your parents were heroes, that was the prime example. They protected you from the attack – granting you the chance to live at the expense of their own. THAT, James, is heroism.” Rite visibly sighed – his shoulders sagged. He appeared haggard and tired; his body obviously broken by the vicious torture. He appeared to have been with sleep for a long time as his body slowly solidified. Rite sat down on the bench. His back rested on the side of the coffin.

“You have to realise that no matter what you do James, you’re ancestry has put this blood inside of you. No matter where you go, no matter what you do it will come back to you. This place will call for you and will demand your attention. You have no choice James – trust me, I’ve been in your shoes before.” The age in Rite’s eyes seemed to show now – the depth of experience, the sights that they had beheld seemed to speak volumes as James felt a likening for this warrior grow.

“Will you do something for me young one? Will you come and sit by me and let me show you something?” James hesitated at first, he still didn’t trust that this wasn’t some trick or a dangerous game but the look of the ghost and its apparent fragility changed his mind. He took a tentative step and then walked boldly across to the bench and sat on the edge, his hands resting on his knees.

As he sat down a swirling appeared in front of the two men. Rite waved his hand through the swirl and a picture slowly materialised. It showed a verdant park with a colossal statue sat right in front of a wide building. The statue was a picture of a man hefting an enormous globe – the globe being Planet Earth.

“This, James, is Paragon City. It is a shining light for the examples of heroism that your parents displayed and it will become a crucial place in the future. The fate of Earth may well depend on the right people defending this place.”

James certainly recognised the city – his firm had donated money to the construction of a new hospice and the reconstruction of one of the monorail stations in a gesture of goodwill.

“But why?” He asked, “Surely one city in America can’t decide what happens across the planet…” James felt a bond growing with Rite of Penance. He sensed a trustworthiness and honesty rarely found in the modern day world.

“Of course it can,” Rite sighed. “At any one time, the cataclysm and Apocalypse of the World could be caused by one of the many groups seeking total domination and control. There are enormous forces at work in the world now, and who is the average person to stop it? The world needs heroes James. It needs people like your mother and father, and it needs people like you.”

The picture dissipated in a cloud of coloured gas and slowly disappeared from view, the occasional shimmer glinting in the soft light that managed to penetrate the dark atmosphere.

“I have something for you James.” Rite of Penance began. “It has passed through the generations of your family for 900 years since the time of King Richard and the Crusades. It is this which caused you to come this way today. Did you not notice you walked a different path? You chose a different route, you defied your normal way of thinking – and now you must do the same again.”

“I have a task for you to complete and it well decide what becomes of you. If you succeed, you shall know all of that which you must know. If you fail, you will remember nothing and will continue with your existence, and when your time comes, you will have lived a happy life. Your family will be around you, and you will go in peace.”

“But remember this. If you fail, you will be breaking the bloodline and your family will forever be broken and sundered. Your ancestors will never find peace – they will be trapped on this mortal coil, forever trapped, forever doomed.” These words seemed to shake the tomb profoundly – a shiver coursed up his spine.

“I… I have no choice. My family, my ancestors will never escape? I cannot, I will not allow that! His fists clenched again, the fire igniting his eyes as the passion overcame his reluctance. His blood pounded, the adrenalin coursed and the desire and passion overcame him. “I will face your task!”

The sight of James’ drive filled Rite of Penance with gladness… He felt his old body growing young again, the strength filling his limbs as his tiredness fell off like unlocked shackles.

“Come then! We must travel a short way to your task… Come with me…”
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